A Helpful Question on the Peer Review

I would have to say that when reading through the peer review there were a lot of questions i read and thought to myself, Oh no i don't know if i did that! I think i did a better job at analyzing my song then i did with the whole synthesis part of my paper. I found it really hard to connect my song lyrics with the book Ishmael Beah, but eventually figured it out. I think the most helpful questions would be "How is the thesis surprising, original, and deep? That is, do you consider the insight even after the paper is over? Describe below what is original, surprising, and or deep. If it’s not yet, how might it become more original?"

When answering these questions about my own paper, i knew right away i might need to focus in on my two thesis a little bit more. I plan on going to the writing center again before our paper is due, and am going to bring my peer reviews with me. Hopefully they will help me out with my thesis!